Here is the rough rough cut that I showed at the critique session today. The file is an MP4 video file (24.9MiB), which you can easily download and view with VideoLan Client or Quicktime. I would very much appreciate anyone who downloads and watches it to give me scathing criticism on structure, shots that are out of place, compositing style that really doesn’t work, audio that doesn’t match visuals (in both mood and synchronization), and any other sorts of comments (including interpretations).
Please keep in mind that all images and sounds after the pullback from the thrusting to the reveal of the children watching is very very very rough. I just threw that together this morning to give people an idea of the direction I was going. Therefore, comments on the awful compositing and unsynched cuts/movements of the end parts will be particularly not useful to me.
Thanks ahead of time!
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Damn you active-x control people and killing my computer! I guess I’ll just have to wait for Tuesday.